http://users.livejournal.com/pardus_/ ([identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/pardus_/) wrote in [personal profile] pouce 2005-07-24 03:18 pm (UTC)

Неплохо написано.
Но мне показались вставки-воспоминания размером в полкниги весьма искуственными и надуманными. Их можно было заменить несколькими абзацами.
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